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MessageSujet: Fictions de Ced' !   Ven 9 Mar - 22:28

Hello tout le monde, après mure réflexion je me suis enfin décidé à poster ma fiction sur le forum, elle est en anglais et pour l'instant incomplète. Critiquez en bien ou en mal ça ne peut que m'aider à progresser ! Voilaaaaaa Bonne Lecture !!! Very Happy


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Everything is Permitted in Love (Crossover: Doctor Who/ Assassin's Creed).
 
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MessageSujet: Re: Fictions de Ced' !   Ven 9 Mar - 22:30

EVERYTHING IS PERMITTED IN LOVE: CHAPITRE 1:


But what the hell is he doing? Everybody is waiting for him, I mean it's not really important, Universe is gonna collapse, I'm a fake plastic Roman and I'm going to kill my girlfriend, everything is okay. Everything is okay... But what is he waiting to save our lives like he always do. Oh, I think that I must do presentations: my name is Rory Williams, I'm a boy who lives in Leadworth, the « he » I talked about is The Doctor a very nice alien who took Amy, my girlfriend from me to bring her in his adventures. And me ? Oh I just died 2000 years in the future and then « pooof » I'm back but in plastic and with the will to kill Amy, a real bed of roses believe me...

What the hell The Doctor is doing, hey wait a minute what the... And there on this a rock in Stonehenge, he stood up a microphone in his hand screaming what will stay the most epic speech of the Roman Empire, ah yes the Universe is gonna collapse in around 200 AC. Well let's accelerate, The Doctor thinks he's clever, his foes imprisoned him in the Pandorica, a evil box which was made as a jail for him. Universe crash down and I kill Amy... Err... still loosing time let's pass to the upper speed, The Doctor escapes from the Pandorica, saves the Universe, sacrificing himself, make a wonderful speech again, come back to life, bringing back all the memories I had of him, including the deep respect and admiration that I have for him... Oh and Amy is alive and we are married now, my name is Rory Pond, another silly idea of The Doctor. Well after the wedding and saying goodbye we are on the road, or should I say on the Vortex again for another adventure.

Okay, I think that now we are ready to begin our story, at this time we are, by we I mean The Doctor, Amy and I, as I said it before we were on the run for a crazy adventure during the Italian Renaissance, sounded exiting... Well it would have been if The Doctor had not decided to dress me like a noble man of that time. I mean, it was not a bad costume, I was used to Roman armour after all, and wearing a gold and red suit, wilding a sword was fun but wearing stockings is... ridiculous, Amy found that funny, why did the Doctor keeps is suit and bow-tie, how unfair. The Doctor in stockings... Wooaaaw it would have been so... unusual ! That's weird, the tunic the Doctor gave me has a strange coast-of-arm, dolphins and yellow crosses, a noble family crest he said but I was sure to have seen it before.

Florence in Renaissance was really great you know, really beautiful, no pollution, prosperity, but that was also a great maze for newcomers, I nearly lost the Doctor three times. It's been three hours now that he was telling us the story of the city, I listened to him, sometimes, but I didn't paid him much attention, Amy was really excited and she giggled at every Doctor's joke and that's was really getting on my nerves. That's when I first saw him, I thought that dust might have dropped in my eyes because for a moment I saw a man running along rooftops. "No it can't be, get focussed on the visit Rory Willi... Pond." Speaking of being focused, where the hell were the Doctor and Amy, it's nearly sunset and that bloody Time-Lord was out of sight. I decided to wait for them near the TARDIS, but of course I get lost before I found it, a shame... It was night, Florence in the dark, it was getting scaring and cold, I kept walking on the night, guided by the gloom of the torchlight.

Suddenly a sound behind me, I looked back, a hooded man had just landed from a roof, something was shinning around is left hand, he got closer, the shinning thing seemed to be a blade fixed to his wrist. Then, I couldn't explain why he rushed towards me, took a leap and land on me, making me falling on the back, I could feel the cold metal of his dagger on my neck, behind his hood I caught his eyes into mine, they were cold and his expression determined, his words stoned me to death...

"What are you doing round here you Pazzi Tradittore ! Speak and I shall spare your life !"


Voila le premier chapitre !!! Hope you like it ! Very Happy
 
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MessageSujet: Re: Fictions de Ced' !   Ven 9 Mar - 22:46

Je ne comprend pas l'anglais Sad


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Inside the mountain
I see fire
Burning the trees
 
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MessageSujet: Re: Fictions de Ced' !   Mer 25 Juil - 19:00

Moi non plus, pourtant, le peu que j'ai compris, c'est trop génial! Crying or Very sad
 
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MessageSujet: Re: Fictions de Ced' !   Mer 25 Juil - 19:19

Je ne pige strictement rien à l'anglais.
 

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